5 Sales-Page Fixes Most Freelancers Skip

Help me explain what I sell in one sentence a stranger gets first time. Check my current description and offer facts: who it's for, their problem, what they get, the outcome I can honestly support and how they start. Ask up to three missing questions; wait. Quote the phrase that confuses most. Choose one move: KEEP, SHARPEN or NARROW. Return one offer sentence (30 words max), up to five deliverables, what's not included and how to start. Remove jargon like 'solutions' and 'elevate'. Invent no results, proof or urgency.

Help me name the one buyer my page should speak to. Check my last few real inquiries or clients: their situation, what triggered them to look, the job they needed done, what nearly stopped them and the proof they asked for. Ask up to three missing questions; wait. Separate what buyers said from my guesses. Choose one move: NAME, SPLIT or ASK. Return a 'This is for you if…' block with three lines in buyers' own words, and one 'This isn't for you if…' line. Invent nothing.

Help me write the 'What you get' and 'Not included' section of my sales page. Check my deliverables, quantities, revision rounds, timing and anything buyers often assume is included. Ask up to three missing questions; wait. Quote any vague phrase like 'unlimited' or 'as needed'. Return a 'What you get' list with quantities, a one-line 'Not included' list, and how extra requests are handled, using only terms I've confirmed. Never add a revision count, fee or policy I haven't given you. Invent nothing.

Help me write honest FAQ answers for my sales page. Use only questions buyers actually asked, from calls, emails or messages, plus my offer facts. Ask up to three missing questions; wait. For each question: the real worry behind it, a plain answer under 50 words from my facts, and proof only if I have it. If a question shows the offer itself is unclear, say so instead of spinning it. Return the top 3–5 FAQs, finished. No guarantees, invented results or pressure.

Help me write the 'how to start' section and button for my sales page. Check my real buying process: what the first step is, how long it takes, what happens after, and what it costs, if anything. Ask up to three missing questions; wait. Return a button label (5 words max) that names the real step, one line under it saying what happens next, and a three-step 'How it works' list. Never promise availability, response times or results I haven't confirmed. Invent nothing.